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Locked

By FurryCabbage

  • MetalAlexARK
    MetalAlexARK left a comment
    I like it. Maybe use less repeat of what the person is saying and use it sparingly to accentuate key tension moments cause the frequent verbal use almost detracts. I like how you used "it's locked!" twice near beginning and end.

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